I actually want to apologize for my snarky comment. That’s not my typical style. Writer to writer, I do care about your success even though I may not agree.

So please take the following as constructive criticism to help you improve your message. Editing is imperative, less is more. The big flashy bold type and caps don’t help your message. Also, proofread for typos and bad grammar. I found quite a few mistakes, like near the end in the all caps section where you obviously meant “witness” but instead have “whiteness”. I’m pretty sure you didn’t mean to write that! Also, don’t forget to have some fun with your writing. Humor helps communicate messages far better than antagonizing folks and saying they haven’t done their research.

Anyway, that’s my two cents. Take’em or leave’em! 😊

(Edited because I even proofread my comments sometimes! Added “though” in the sentence “…even though I may disagree”)